Everyone has at least one unforgettable feast. It doesn’t matter about how expensive the meal is. Maybe its purpose is to get all of family members together to chat about their recent life. I have been in a remarkable feast many years ago because of my grandmothers’ birthday. It’s evident that it was a pleasure to celebrate and enjoy it.
I still remembered everything on that day. I thought that it’s memorable for me to remember this day. At first, my parents and my mom’s sister hoped to celebrate, yet my grandparents declined because they didn’t want to spend much money. However, we didn’t tell them we prepared a celebration, we just took them to the restaurant. After entering, they got a surprise and seemed that they desired to enjoy this feast. We went to a Yunnan restaurant and their cuisine was sour and spicy. Its dishes were authentic dish. The waiter suggested that we needed to order what kinds of special ones or the dishes that we never tasted before . When every dish was sent arrived, the waiter also told us how the chief cooked and prepared it. I couldn’t help drooling to taste immediately. After having this feast, we sang a birthday’s songs for my grandparents. They made a wish which was if everyone has leisure time, we will get together or go somewhere they like. I appreciated that my family imparted me a unforgettable memory.
This feast was not so wonderful, but it’s not important about their high price. This meal made my family have a reunion. It’s hard to get together to have a meal because every adults[one had] go to back to the city to work. They have no time to come back to their hometown. It’s really a memorable feast ever.
Wow, that is a really unforgettable memory that u have ever met. Let me join you next time!
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回覆刪除the feast makes you like a king
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回覆刪除Hi William, thanks for sharing your post.
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Everyone has at least one unforgettable feast. It doesn’t matter about how expensive the meal is. Maybe its purpose is to get all of family members together to chat [about] their recent life. I have been [in a] remarkable feat [feast?] many years ago because of my grandparents’ birthday. [Q: both your grandparents' had the same birthday celebration?] It’s evident that it is [was] a pleasure to celebrate and enjoy it.
I still remembered everything on that day. I thought that it’s memorable for me to memorize [remember/recollect] this day. At first, my parents and my mom’s sister hoped to celebrate, yet my grandparents declined because they didn’t want to cost [spend] much money. However, we didn’t tell them we prepared a celebration, we just took them to the restaurant. After entering, they got a surprise and seemed that they desired to enjoy this feast. We went [to] a Yunnan restaurant and their cuisine was sour and spicy. Its dishes were authentic dish. The waiter suggested that we needed to order what kinds of unusual dished [what do you mean bu unusual dishes?]. When every dish was sent by waiter [arrived], the waiter also told us how the chief cooked [and prepared it]. I couldn’t help drooling to taste immediately. After having this feast, we sang a birthday’s songs for my grandparents. They made [a] wish which [was] if everyone has leisure time, we will get together or go somewhere they like. I appreciated that my family imparted me a unforgettable memory.
This feast was not so expensive, but it’s not important about their high price [this contradicts the first phrase. please rephrase]. This meal made my family have[a] reunion. It’s hard to get together to have a meal because every adults[one had] go to [back to the] city to work. They have no time to come back [to] their hometown. For me, it’s really a memorable feast --[change the last line] since I was born.